Descriptive Writing
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Essay on the Moments Before and After an Outdoor Event Ruined by Weather
Describe the few minutes just before and after an outdoor event is ruined by the weather
October/November 2022-Cambridge International AS Level-8021/12-ENGLISH GENERAL PAPER

The anticipation and excitement before an outdoor event, coupled with the sudden onset of bad weather, can lead to disappointment and chaos.

Describing the initial enthusiasm, followed by the scramble to seek shelter or protect equipment, adds tension to the narrative.
Brainstorming Ideas.

Despite the disappointment, people may find camaraderie and humor in navigating through the unexpected situation.
Essay
The sun was shining brightly on the day of the outdoor charity event, and I was in high spirits. My friends and I had worked hard for the last few months to organize this day, and I couldn’t wait to see it come to fruition. We had set up tents for the vendors, arranged for live music and entertainment, and had asked local businesses to donate prizes for the raffle.
Just minutes before the event was due to start, the sky began to darken ominously. A stiff wind blew in from the west, and a few drops of rain started to fall. The tents began to flap wildly in the wind, and people started to panic. I looked around desperately for something to protect the tents, but it was too late.
Suddenly, a huge gust of wind blew through, and the tents collapsed in an instant. I watched in horror as everything we had worked so hard for was destroyed in a matter of seconds. The rain started to pour down, and everyone ran for shelter. I felt helpless as I watched the event I had worked so hard for being ruined by the weather.
The rain continued to pour for the next few minutes, and I held my breath, hoping it would soon pass. Eventually, the rain stopped and the wind died down. We surveyed the damage and started to assess the situation. Thankfully, no one was injured, and we were able to salvage some of the equipment.
The event was a total disaster, but I was surprised by how people responded. People started to help us clean up and put the tents back in place, and the vendors donated the prizes for the raffle. Everyone worked together to make the best of the situation, and it was truly inspiring to see.
The event was a total failure, but it was a valuable lesson. No matter how hard you work and how much you prepare, nature can be unpredictable. I learned to always be prepared for the unexpected and to always stay positive in difficult situations. Despite the setback, the event was a success in its own way, and I will never forget the lesson it taught me.
