Directed Writing
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Letter - Informing a Friend about a School Visit from an Important Person
Last year, your best friend at school moved away to live in another town. Recently, a very important person came to visit your school. You decide to write a letter to your friend with all the details of the visit. Write your letter. You must include the following: • who the important person was and when the visit took place • details of what happened during the visit • why the visit was important for you and your school. Cover all three points above in detail. You should make your letter interesting and informative. Start your letter ‘Dear ...,’ and remember to supply a suitable ending.
October/November 2022-Cambridge International AS Level-8021/12-ENGLISH GENERAL PAPER
Writing a letter to your best friend about a visit from an important person to your school involves sharing details of the visit's significance, the events that took place, and the impact on you and your school.
Expressing your excitement, gratitude, or other emotions related to the visit can make the letter personal and heartfelt.
Brainstorming Ideas.
Reflecting on how the visit affected your perspective or contributed to your personal growth adds depth to the letter.
Essay
Dear Jane,
I hope you are doing well in your new town. I wanted to share some exciting news with you about something that happened at school yesterday. An important person, Greta Thunder, a famous environmental activist, came to visit our school. It was such an honor for our school to have her visit us.
During her visit, Greta made a very inspiring speech about the importance of taking action to protect our environment and the role that young people can play in creating a sustainable future. She shared her own experiences as a young environmental activist and the challenges she faced. Greta also answered questions from students and inspired us to take action in our own community to make a difference.
The visit was important for both me and the school. It not only educated us about the current state of the environment and the urgent need to take action, but it also inspired us to take action and make a difference. Her speech has created a positive impact on the student body, many of them are discussing the topic and want to be part of the change. The school plans to continue to host similar events in the future and to follow up on Greta's message and also to continue to raise awareness on the topic.
I wish you were here to experience it with me. I am sure it would have been an unforgettable experience for you too.
Take care,
[Your name]
