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Title :

Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘I could see my friend shouting to me but there was too much noise to hear what my friend was saying.

Essay type:

Narrative Writing



Cambridge O Level

May/June 2021

I could feel the excitement building inside me as I made my way to the front of the crowd at the concert. My best friend, Jake, was by my side, and we were both buzzing with anticipation for the show to begin.

As the lights dimmed and the band took the stage, the crowd roared to life. Jake and I were jumping up and down, singing along to every song, lost in the energy of the moment.

But as the concert reached its peak, something went wrong. The crowd around us began to surge forward, and I could feel myself being pulled away from Jake. I tried to fight my way back to him, but the sea of bodies was too strong.

I could see my friend shouting to me, but there was too much noise to hear what he was saying. I could see the look of panic on his face, and I knew that he was trying to tell me something important.

I fought my way through the crowd, determined to get to Jake. Finally, I reached him, and he pulled me close, shouting in my ear.

"We have to get out of here!" he shouted. "There's a problem with the stage! The stage's scaffolding started shaking and the band had to stop playing, everyone panicked and started to push and shove to get out of the concert hall."

My heart raced as I realized the danger we were in. We pushed our way through the crowd, fighting to get to the exits. As we finally made it out of the concert hall, we could hear the sounds of the crowd panicking behind us.

We collapsed on the curb outside, our hearts pounding and our adrenaline still pumping. As we caught our breath, Jake turned to me, a look of relief on his face.

"Thanks for getting us out of there," he said. "I don't know what would have happened if you hadn't been there."

I smiled, still feeling the rush of the concert and the thrill of our escape. It was a night I would never forget, a night where I realized the true value of friendship and the importance of being there for each other in difficult times.

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