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Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘When they opened the jewellery box, they could not
believe what was in it.’

Essay Type:

Narrative Writing

Essay Plan

Setting: A quiet suburban neighborhood with a mysterious, old Victorian house

Main character: Jamie, 32 years old, a curious antique collector who is drawn to the history and stories behind objects

Conflict: Jamie discovers a hidden jewelry box in the Victorian house that holds a secret that changes their life

Dialogue: Use dialogue to reveal Jamie's interactions with other characters and to uncover the mystery surrounding the jewelry box

Theme: The power of curiosity and the unexpected nature of life's surprises

Tone: Mysterious, intriguing, and emotional

Pacing: Start with a moderate pace to establish the setting, then increase the pace as Jamie uncovers the mystery, and finally slow down to reveal the emotional resolution

Plotline: Introduction – Jamie's fascination with antiques; Climax – Discovery of the jewelry box; Story details – Unraveling the mystery; Interesting plot twist – The contents of the jewelry box reveal a personal connection; Ending – Jamie learns the value of unexpected surprises and embracing life's mysteries

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