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Describe a place where you have felt comfortable.
You should write about:
• things, events or places that made you comfortable
• how the place affected your thoughts and feelings
• the way you feel about that place now

Essay Type:

Narrative Writing

Essay Plan

Setting: A cozy, rustic lakeside cabin surrounded by a lush forest

Main character: Jamie, 32 years old, a stressed-out software engineer who longs for a peaceful escape from the pressures of work and city life

Conflict: Jamie struggles to find a sanctuary that offers solace and rejuvenation

Dialogue: Use dialogue to express Jamie's interactions with others, their thoughts, and feelings about the cabin and its surroundings

Theme: The healing power of nature and finding comfort in a special place

Tone: Calm, reflective, and introspective

Pacing: Begin with a slow pace to establish the setting and emotions, gradually increase the pace as Jamie discovers the place, and finally slow down as Jamie reflects on the impact of the cabin on their life

Plotline: Introduction – Jamie's stressful life; Climax – Discovering the lakeside cabin; Story details – Exploring the cabin and its surroundings; Interesting plot twist – Realization of the cabin's impact on Jamie's thoughts and feelings; Ending – Current feelings about the cabin

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